Reading ‘Emergency Skin’

My favourite reading experience of 2023 was catching up with Emergency Skin (a ‘novelette’) by N.K. Jemsin (audiobook narrated by Jason Isaacs), published by Amazon Original Stories, 2019

Jemsin is an award-winning science fiction writer and this story (only one hour’s listening in audiobook form) shows her at her most skilful. Most stories are written in either the third person (he, she, they, it etc) or the first person (I, we, us), however Jemsin has tackled this story in the second person (you). Unlike other attempts I’ve read doing this, she’s got it to work brilliantly for the purposes of this tale.

We are following a man from another planet who has been sent back to Earth to collect the cell cultures that are needed to keep manufacturing the synthetic skin used to protect the humans on the other planet. However, the story unfolds as the AI implanted in the man’s brain tells him what to do as he goes about fulfilling the mission.

‘We should begin with a briefing, since you’re now authorized for Information Level Secret. On its face, this mission is simple: return to the ruined planet Tellus, from which mankind originates. When the Founders realised the world was dying, they …. Fled to a new world circling another sun, so that something of it – the best of it – would survive. …How brave you are to walk in your forefathers’ footsteps!

No, there’s no one left alive on Tellus. The planet was in full environmental collapse …when our people left. There were just too many people, and too many of those were unfit, infirm, too old, or too young. …so we did the only merciful thing we could: we left them behind.

Of course that was mercy. Do you think your ancestors wanted to leave billions of people to starve and suffocate and drown? It was simply that our new home could support only a few.”

N.K. Jemsin, ‘Emergency skin’, p.5 (… indicates ellipted words)

And so the story progresses. We never hear what the man thinks or says but, by the AI’s responses, we know what he is communicating. The AI responses also let us understand what the new world that the man has come from is like – a world where there is only one gender (people now being manufactured), and where a disposable man (like the man in the story) doesn’t have a ‘skin’, he has a ‘composite’ covering and his reward for making this journey to collect skin samples, is to have skin made for him – in the new world only those in power have skin.

My favourite quote is the protest from the AI to the man:

‘Only a few can have everything, don’t you see? What these people believe isn’t feasible. They want everything for everyone, and look at where it’s gotten them! Half of them aren’t even men.”

At one level, we see how the man’s views radically change through the increasingly petulant hysteria of his AI. At a deeper level, Jemsin invites us to realise that to care for each other and the world is not an impossible challenge.

Talk Fest!

In the last twelve months I have been talking about my sci-fi novel ‘Grey Nomad’ (Brio Books, 2023) non-stop (or so it seems). During the interviews, panel conversations, and interviews I have also learned all sorts of things about my book that I didn’t predict! For instance,

  • 30-something-year-olds love reading about an intrepid 70 year old
  • Knitters want a copy of the pattern for JT’s scarf (working on it!)
  • Satirical politics wins over non-sci-fi readers (who knew?)
  • Some readers come for the humour and some for the science. Lucky for me, the novel has both!

The world of writing festivals is filled with tireless committee members and wonderful interviewers who selflessly give their time to prepare and present these events. My thanks to everyone I had the good fortune to meet over the last year – it’s been a wonderful experience.

Here are a few more highlights to add to those I’ve talked about in this blog before:

Mudgee Readers’ Festival August 2023

At Mudgee Readers' Festival

This festival invites you to share the friendliness of the Mudgee community with food, entertainment, and of course reading. Sharelle Fellows, a retired history teacher, interviewed me in such an insightful and thorough way I really think she knew more about my book than I did.

The Book Lovers Club, Northern Beaches September 2023

This mega book club plays a large part in the community of the northern beaches of Sydney. My mum joined it back in the early 70s, so I was thrilled to be able to speak about her influence on me as a reader and writer when I talked there. Special thanks to Glenys Murray, librarian and beta-reader extraordinaire, for all her support.

Maitland Indie Festival October 2023

Whether it’s art or literature, if it’s independent and local then it fits the mission of this festival. I joined novelist Amber Jakeman (latest novel ‘Summer Beach’) to discuss the phenomenon of ‘cosy fiction’ with Meg Vertigan, author of ‘The Strong Dress’ (Puncher & Wattman, 2023). Our audience agreed with us that just because the story is ‘cosy’ doesn’t mean it lacks punch.

‘Pirate Purl’ – Katrina Kellett

What a legend! Katrina runs ‘Pirate’ Purl’, an independent hand dyed yarn business which produces a colour range that is both beautiful and environmentally sound. Throughout 2023, Katrina volunteered to host my book about knitting-mad Joyce on her sales tables at the many yarn and fibre festivals throughout NSW and Victoria.  I can’t thank her enough – though perhaps a sequel could include an indie dyer as a character??!! (stay tuned).

‘Grey Nomad’ – early eBook release!

The paperback version of my sci-fi novel ‘Grey Nomad’ is due for release in early 2023, but you don’t have to wait that long — the publisher has released the eBook version ahead of schedule!

Here’s a taster….

‘There, turn left,’ she shouted. ‘Left!’

The caravan hit the side of the road in a grinding flurry of gravel, and grit strafed the windscreen. Bruce wrestled with the steering wheel to stop them rolling. With a jolt, Joyce’s head hit the rest as the car stopped. Dust swirled and only the clatter of her knitting needles falling to the floor rattled the sudden silence.

‘What the hell do you think you’re doing, shouting at me like that?’ he roared. ‘I don’t know what’s got into you lately.’

‘You missed the turn, that’s what,’ Joyce said tersely. ‘The sign was huge—“Viridian Spaceship” in letters as high as a house. How did you miss it?’

Even if you don’t usually read science fiction, I think you’ll enjoy reading this story of Joyce, a stalwart member of the Country Women’s Association, who at seventy years of age gets abducted by aliens and thrust into the middle of an intragalactic war that threatens Earth. You may have heard of the genre of ‘cosy crime’ – well, I think I may just have written a ‘cosy sci-fi’ book. Alternatively, my editor jokes that ‘Grey Nomad’ is a coming-of-age story!

Anyhow, I’d love you to read my novel – if you like it, then it would be really great if you wrote a review for it on Goodreads, and/or on the site from which you downloaded the book (Apple books, Booktopia, Google Play, Kindle, or Kobo).

Alison

Great News!

Just wanted to share my good news — I’ve been offered a publishing contract for my sci-fi novel, ‘Grey Nomad’! It’s with Booktopia Publishing (who have expanded from being mainly an online book retailer to publishing as well). After getting a legal contract consultation, I signed on Friday — so lots of champagne this weekend! 

I’ve put up a few posts about this story before, and I’ve kept working on it, encouraged by earlier drafts being shortlisted for the Brio Books Fantastica Prize in 2019, and for the Queensland Writers’ Centre Adaptable program in 2020. Lots of revising and great editing advice has got it to the stage it is now. I know that there’s still a whole lot more polishing to go, but what a joy to be able to undertake revisions knowing that sometime soonish (maybe toward the end of next year????) I’ll be able to share the story itself.

Recruited

Here’s the beginning of something that might grow up one day! I’ve been polishing it for a while now–perhaps I need to keep writing?

Recruited

Kyle squinted through a rusted hole in the corrugated iron. The street lay empty in the predawn darkness. Trucks rumbled like distant thunder. Perhaps the Recruiters had met their quota and would go past them.

‘See anything?’ Kegan leant on his shovel; his face hidden in the flickering light from the candle stub. The trench he was digging lay deep in darkness.

Kyle shook his head. ‘Nothing yet.’ He took hold of the shovel, intending to help.

‘Get out of it.’ His father tossed a hessian sack at him. ‘You’d as well use a teaspoon for all the good you’d do digging. Get rid of all this.’ He nodded to the pile of excavated dirt before starting to dig again. He resumed his muttered chant with each thrust into the soil–‘Not my son, they won’t take him, not my son‘–a mantra, lest harm should befall his precious Kegan, whose digging kept pace alongside.

Only a year older than Kyle, Kegan looked to be a man grown. But Kyle’s build came from their sparrow of a mother and, like her, he’d been a victim of the first wave of the Canker. Unlike her, he’d survived, though not untouched. Kyle didn’t need to wonder if his father would go to such lengths to save him from the Recruiters if he was the elder of his sons. He knew the answer.

Shoulders aching, he scooped the loose dirt into the sack on the ground. He carted it out the back, stumbling under its weight. He scattered the dirt in caches among the rusted wire, in between the lumps of broken concrete, desperately trying not to disturb the silence. Every neighbour posed a threat when information was the only currency.

(“Shanty town in Soweto” by eugene is licensed under CC BY-NC-SA 2.0)

If the Recruiters found Kegan and took him–Kyle’s breath caught in his throat and his head spun–then it would be just him and his father. He didn’t know which he feared more–his father abandoning him, as he almost certainly would without Kegan to look after him, or his father staying with him.

He shut his eyes, feeling the cold damp of morning dew on his skin. Slowly, his chest relaxed and the air slid gently down into his lungs. He savoured the sensation, knowing how hard it would be to recall the coolness once the day began its relentless climb into baking heat.

‘Where’s that idiot?’

Jolted back to awareness by his father’s voice, Kyle checked the rubble and dirt one last time in the dim grey of the dawn. The noise of the Recruiters’ trucks growled only streets away.

Back inside, Kegan lay in the trench, his arms crossed corpse-like, and slipped him a wink. Kyle tried to grin back as best he could. The Canker had a vicious sense of humour. Its scars left Kyle’s face a rigid mask, incapable of smiling.

Kegan gave the thumbs-up sign to their father who nodded grimly and slid a flimsy piece of fibro over the top. As fast as his father shovelled on a thin layer of dirt, Kyle frantically patted the earth down. Staggering back to his feet, Kyle threw over their thread-bare rug. The approaching trucks reverberated in the next block.

It was a poor hiding place but it was all they could do. Their hut had only the one room so, if the Recruiters looked in from the doorway, then maybe that would be enough to satisfy them that Kegan had done a runner. He wouldn’t be the first to evade Service. They must be used to it by now.

Kyle stationed himself back at his peep-hole. His father paced.

Seconds later, the trucks turned into their street. Like a bee-hive facing invading wasps, the street instantly swarmed with people rushing from shanty to shanty. Everyone knew the Recruiters preferred dawn raids, but it always came as a shock when the harvesting of eldest sons began.

The engines roared closer. The packed earth beneath Kyle’s bare feet shuddered. A screech and the hiss of pneumatic brakes–only metres from their door.

The back doors of the truck flew open and a ramp thudded to the ground. Helmeted men stamped their way down and fanned out in military formation. The Recruiters’ uniforms were as patched as the city they patrolled. Their headgear was still full faced to hide their identity, even though many of them now resorted to using motorbike helmets.

One of them raised a megaphone, though he could have spoken without it and still been heard through the flimsy walls of the huts lining the street.

‘By order of the Provincial Government, and under the Ordinances of the Recruitment Act of 2063, all people turning 18, are instructed to report for Service. Anyone known to have failed to report will be placed on the Register of Treasonous Persons and, when found, will be shot without trial. Those eligible for Service are hereby called for duty immediately.’ With these last words, the Recruiter tossed the megaphone into the truck. This gesture, more than any words he said, communicated that there would be no second chances.

‘J.M. Abrams,’ he barked, looking at his list.

There came a scraping as a hingeless door was hefted open, and the sound of a woman weeping. From up the street came Jimmy, a scrawny beanpole of a young man wearing only a ragged pair of shorts. He’d left behind his shirt and shoes for his younger brothers, Kyle surmised.

‘D. A. Meecham.’

The tap of Debbie’s stick came down the alley, as she used the soundings to find her way between the rows of shacks into the street. Like Kyle, she was one of the few to survive the Canker, but her eyes had been eaten away.

Kyle almost expected the Recruiters to reject her. When he was younger, they only recruited the fit but, for the last few years, it seemed that they’d take anyone.

Two of the other Recruiters conferred over a list on a clipboard. Kyle drew back from his spy-hole as one of them approached the door.

‘K.G. Zimmer,’ he called out, reading from his list.

Inside the stifling hut, Kyle’s father stared at him. Normally, his father’s gaze skimmed over him as if he were one of the mangy dogs that slunk along the alleyways for scraps. For one mad moment, he thought that his father was asking Kyle what he should do.

As it turned out, his father knew exactly what he was about to do. Without uttering a word, in one long reach of his arm, his father grabbed him, manhandling him toward the door.

‘No,’ Kyle whispered hoarsely, digging his heels into the dirt floor. He glanced back to where Kegan lay imprisoned, unable to help him–as no doubt his father had planned. ‘No,’ he gasped.

‘Yes,’ his father said through gritted teeth.

Kyle’s mind seethed with outrage and fear. ‘It won’t work. What will you do next year when they come looking for me?’

‘That’s next year, son,’ he said.

It would come to him, years later, that was the first and last time his father had called him son.

_____

A PITCH!

Have knitting, will travel … in space … with aliens!

I’m very excited to report that my unpublished sci-fi novel ‘Grey Nomad’ was shortlisted in the 2020 Adaptable competition that was run by Queensland Writers’ Centre in conjunction with the Gold Coast Film Festival.  I talked briefly about the development of my idea back on 25 February 2019 as the first of many drafts emerged NaNoWriMo.

THE STORY: Surviving an alien abduction will call upon all Joyce’s experience as a long-standing member of the Country Women’s Association.

Here’s a taster — https://www.facebook.com/qldwriters/videos/290383195277942/

The 2020 Adaptable competition had 240 submissions and they shortlisted 26 of us for the opportunity to pitch our work to film/tv producers face-to-face during the Festival’s Industry Market Day. However, due to the COVID-19 pandemic they have had to cancel the Film Festival, so they are going to proceed with us doing our pitches online. To prepare us, the Queensland Writers’ Centre have provided us with a free 2-hr workshop on writing a synopsis, and three 1:1 online consultations about developing our pitch before the big day: 16 April. Keep your fingers crossed for me!

Grey Nomad

This is where I come clean. Last month, I posted a minor rant about my growing irritation with quirky protagonists who achieve the astonishing feat of being both older and yet still having the potential of a character arc. My thoughts were, I confess, prompted by my own world-building for a sci-fi-lite novella I was developing through November. (I was participating in NaNoWriMo – National Novel Writing Month for the second time.)

Here’s the synopsis of my work-in-progress.

Grey Nomad

(Courtesy of NASA – public domain)

Alien spaceships from the planet Liser have landed in every major country on Earth. Joyce convinces her staid husband to divert from their annual caravan holiday itinerary to brave the queues of tourists to see the spaceship in Canberra. Unexpectedly, the Liseran spaceship does an emergency take-off to evade imminent attack by spaceships of their long-standing enemy, the Thulians. Joyce and JT, an avid trekkie, are the only tourists left on board with the human security team in a spaceship filled with angry aliens hurtling toward a space war.

Surviving an alien war won’t just demand that Joyce master telepathy, it will also call upon all her experience from her years with the Country Women’s Association.

My own journey in writing this piece is proving to be a lot of fun and, so far, Joyce is neither quirky nor quaint—but she does have dodgy knees.